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PDF Critiques and Sharing Opportunities OCTOBER 13-14-15 2017 BROCHURE

First Pages—PB & Novel Breakouts

Submit your most polished work for the First Pages Panels. There will be one room for Picture Books and one room for Chapter Books/Middle Grade/YA. This work should be polished and submission ready. A panel of published writers and industry professionals will comment on the work. Only 10-15 stories can be shared, so there’s no guarantee of inclusion.

DO: Mail 4 copies of your first page postmarked on or before August 20 to:

Eileen Boggess
6732 Northview Drive
Urbandale, IA 50322

Include the title and genre only. Double-spaced, 12-point font. They are read anonymously, so the audience will not know which story is yours.

Writers’ Round Table

8 copies of up to 3 full pages of a work-in-progress to share with a table of writers Double-spaced, 12 point font, title, genre, starting at the top of the page.

A reader will read the WIP aloud. Group members may say a few words about each one. A facilitator will keep the process moving. Each group will have a featured guest speaker (Cron, Sandford, Santopolo, Soloway, Naberhaus, Skeers) or one of Iowa’s fabulous published authors who will comment last on each piece.

Plan on about 10 minutes per person. A table facilitator will ensure everyone gets an equal amount of time.

Point of the Workshop:
At the end of the session, you’ll have ideas from your table-mates to help the story move forward. 


Story Slam FAQ’s

What is a story slam? 

A Story Slam is a competition where people read their original work without props, costumes, or music in front of a panel of judges. Each piece must be less than three minutes in length.

1st Round: 12 slammers compete
2nd Round: Top 6 slammers advance and perform a different piece than round one
3rd Round: Top 3 slammers advance and perform a different piece than the previous rounds. The Story Slam winner is announced at the end of round three


Who chooses who advances in each round?

A panel of five judges will be picked from the audience. Each judge will privately score your slam based on how much they liked your piece and your performance of it. Judges give each slam a score from 0 to 10, with 10 being the highest or “perfect” score. 


What makes a winning story slam performance?

The pieces should be able to reach your audience the first time it’s heard and move them in some emotional way. How it is read is as important as the content.


How can I participate?

Sign up before Saturday at 6:00 P.M. and bring three pieces of writing to perform to Dublin City Pub. Twelve names will be randomly drawn at the beginning of the Story Slam. 


What if my name is chosen?

You will be given three minutes to perform your original piece in front of a panel of five judges. If you go over the time limit, 10 points will be deducted from the total score. Participants must read their own work.


What do I win?

All participants will receive a token of appreciation for their bravery. The winning slammer will be awarded a fabulous prize!


What if my feelings get hurt?

Audience members will cheer, whistle, snap, or applaud every person who is brave enough to perform. 


What if I don’t want to read my story, but still want to participate?

Share your enthusiasm with your fellow writers by cheering and applauding each of their performances. Grab a drink, make some friends, and have a fun-filled evening of camaraderie!